Audience Feedback

This is feedback from our media teacher Mr Burrows after we showed him our first rough cut.

• There was motion on the establishing shot
• There should be a shot of the parents leaving the house an driving off
• Little girl should be scared to signify the genre early on. (We were not able to re-film the little girl)
• Final girl should be shown having school books or studying
• Babysitter should be more frantic/rush up the stairs
• More reaction from the babysitter at the false scare
• Babysitter should look more scared than weary.
• Calling girls name out more franticly 
• There should be a pendant or something like that which the older and younger version of Rachel wears to anchor the character
• Older Rachel could be shot as an outsider
• There should be more movement around the house
• Open window in the kitchen