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In our group there is Becky Wholley (featured left) and me, Hannah Ferreira. We are producing a 2 minute film opening of the horror genre. The Film title is Sleep Tight.
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Thursday, 3 February 2011

Audience Feedback

This is feedback from our media teacher Mr Burrows after we showed him our first rough cut.

  • There was motion on the establishing shot
  • There should be a shot of the parents leaving the house an driving off
  • Little girl should be scared to signify the genre early on. (We were not able to re-film the little girl)
  • Final girl should be shown having school books or studying
  • Babysitter should be more frantic/rush up the stairs
  • More reaction from the babysitter at the false scare
  • Babysitter should look more scared than weary.
  • Calling girls name out more franticly 
  • There should be a pendant or something like that which the older and younger version of Rachel wears to anchor the character
  • Older Rachel could be shot as an outsider
  • There should be more movement around the house
  • Open window in the kitchen

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